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The adventures of Yolly Lolly and Krispy Kreme by fika-with-alice The adventures of Yolly Lolly and Krispy Kreme by fika-with-alice
NO YOLANDA. TOO FAR.
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:) Hope you enjoy my critiquiness of your comic! Love it by the way! It is definetly like most memes I've seen but with a little more flair. The story is really funny. You could work on making it more visibly appealing but if you were going for the meme look you got it down pat! It doesn't make a lot of sense but that doesn't matter at all (for me anyways). I would like you to do another one if you could. I very much did enjoy reading your little comic. Maybe you should do a follow up, just a sugestion though. ;)
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YolandasMagicalSword Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
HAHAHAHA. So good. you shouldve stated.
Yolanda decided to be Grell again, so this is what happend
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fika-with-alice Nov 27, 2012  Student Photographer
I think anyone could have picked up that you were going bipolar again and turning into grell. :L
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YolandasMagicalSword Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA. xD
yes.
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fika-with-alice Nov 27, 2012  Student Photographer
Whats that link? Its broken. Who are you...
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